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The last thing Hellraiser remembered was being lifted into the air and feeling his neck getting snapped. He opens his eyes to see nothing but white completely surround him.

"What the...." he says as he wonders if he's dead. He feels fear grip him as he tries to move in the white lit coffin, but suddenly it opens. He springs up and looks around.
"The walls are golden, like in a Goa'uld ship" he thinks.

"Welcome back to the land of the living" he hears an eerily familiar voice say. He turns his head to see Ptah standing there smiling at him.

"YOU BASTARD!" HR shouts as he's about to leap out of the sarcophagus, but Ptah uses his powers to keep him levitating in the air.

"I thought you would be happy, that I saved your life"

"You son of a bitch. When I get my hands on you, I'll-"

"Save your threats! You are powerless against me" Ptah smiles and makes HR spin slowly in the air as he walks around him. "None of your friends are coming to save you. They all think you're dead. And you were. Besides, no one knows the location of this Ha'Tak other than me"

"Why did you...bring me back? I thought you wanted to see me dead"

Ptah smirked as he slowly turned HR upside down, "I do. But I think you underestimate the pleasure I will gain from your suffering", his eyes flashed.

HR wondered why the Goa'uld in his clone hated him so much. He could feel the blood rushing to his head and then he laughed a little.
"He's fighting you, isn't he? Me. All the time, and you can't stand that"

Ptah's smile vanished and instead he frowned, "Nothing of the host survives. NOTHING!"

HR laughed again at him, "he's like me, and I would never give up against you, you pathetic little worm". Suddenly he was thrown against the wall, hitting it with his back and then landing on his head on the ground.

"Ouch" he said as he sat up. He knew that Ptah was in control. But he could piss him off. "That hurt"

"Get used to it. Pain will be your constant companion from now on"

"Pain will be your blablabla" HR says mimicking Ptah.

Ptah doesn't hold back his anger and uses his powers to line HR up against the wall. He picks out a small blade form his belt and stabs him over and over. HR falls to his knees, grabbing Ptah before he falls dead to the floor.

Ptah kicked him a couple of times before calming down. He again lifted HR into the sarcophagus and walked away as it closed.
Just a short fic I wrote quick for the Wraith Invasion RPG. Nothing too fancy, story stol.....inspired by the SG-1 episode Abyss.

OK...some background info.
Hellraiser is my main RP character, and he is the Queens worshiper. He got cloned, and that clone was taken over by my OC Goa'uld Ptah.
Not so long ago, Ptah was able to advance his host and give him telekinetic powers among others. At the same time, HR and a team of Wraith led an attack against the Goa'uld, but things didn't go as planned and HR was killed by Ptah, who disappeared with HRs body.
And then this fic takes place.
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toska9's avatar
Oh dear...will it be a classic case of saving yourself????
What will happen in the next fic?